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Its hurting...and its insane...
But with what did it begin...
With all those memories flying around flashbacks started somewhere and it ended somewhere and in all this mess something did hurt me.
Where did this hurting start from...Did it 'from the betrayal of the friend whom i helped from all my heart.' or did it come 'from the pain of the friend i shared in the past reveal itself again.' or 'the pain of something yet to come..'or 'the pain of some natural expectations i had from someone' or 'did it began from somewhere new..' Where did this pain come from. Why had this had to happen today in this carnival of past memories. Why cant that one coward memory present itself as single one. Then I will let that memory know who is stronger. Hurting me in the back with a disguised appearance. Well friend you might have won the round but the fight is still on and the day i find you alone it will be a happy end to the poor memory...
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P.S- This is An Extract From My Dairy...Sorry it does not contain details...maybe the post wont qualify for the TON...But Still I Had to Post This...SORRY...
-Nickhil Patokar
22 Comments !!!:
Hey Nikhil, Honestly, I wasn't able to extract much from the post. But I wish that you get out of the bad memories soon! Good Luck :)
Interesting but a bit too abstract nd abstract's one thing tht sumtimes goes above my head though i think i got some hang of the post.. Bt cudnt relate it to the given topic :)
hmmm...cute nd small,...nice.
Cheers,
Ravan
Like Vipul said, interesting but nt able to relate it to the topic. If i forget that topic and the contest, it sure was a well written one :)
Hmm...it's a shame what you are going through at the moment but like some other comments, I too was unable to relate it to the topic. Either way, I hope things work out for you and get better...
@ EVERYONE....
Thanks for your concern and the wishes actually i was out of it when i started writing this..and when i finished penning down my thoughts..i was completly out of the bad memories.Really guys its great to write down the feelings it helps.. Also i came to know that the topic for this time's TON is ALL IN A DAY'S WORK..when i had done.So i decided i will paste the same for this month...coz whatever happened, happened on the very same day...well i could not write about the work but hey i could relate to allmost half the topic [:P]....
anyways everyone thanks for the comment and i hope this memories never come back...And if they do come again they will not live ...[;)]
Writing is really therapeutic, isn't it?
Well about the post, I only wish you'd elaborated it.
Whatever it is, all the very best to you. Cheerios!
Hi.
Well... as it goes I think your piece has been some sort of a catharsis for you. As you yourself say...putting it down has helped you to deal with it.
I think its brave of you to have come out to share it. :)
All the very best!
Hi....
I think either the post is missing the comprehensiveness or i am bad at subjective interpretations...
I got it abstractly thought it appeared interesting while reading...may be few more lines need to be filled .
What i opine is that 'sometimes memory is a big curse'...
May be thats the reason why we dont remember all the days in our life...
You grieving over your broken heart, huh?
I couldn't relate it with the topic but I hope you will get over your past, very soon.
Your day you decide what to post .... anyways... made me wonder .. one memory at a time .. nice idea
difficult to write on a theme when mind is closed...nic picture though.... :))
Oh..I agree..Writing really helps..The first time I did it, I felt as if my problem was solved, though its still lingering around..But you definitely worded your thoughts and feelings very well.
Well... life is too long to have sad or negative feelings.
PS: A prequel to this post would help...
Bad memories always have strong inprints on mind and they haunt you forever! So this is a good entry for Blog-a -ton! Abstract and different!
see humans have this habit of think that they are special and everything that happens to them is miracle but the fact is rare events do happen. So something rare happenning is not rare. You go ur judgement wrong buddy you could've chose someother for Blog-a-ton
What goes around ..comes around...hang in there..
Hi!
You should write more often. Even i was into diary writing. I like your style of writing its so similar to mine though this style does not reflect much on my blog.
Keep it up!!
hmmm this time i really dint follow this..i hope i dont piss you off with such a comment!!!
Betrayal by a frnd can be very painful..
@ EVERYONE....
Thanks for your concern and the wishes actually i was out of it when i started writing this..and when i finished penning down my thoughts..i was completly out of the bad memories.Really guys its great to write down the feelings it helps.. Also i came to know that the topic for this time's TON is ALL IN A DAY'S WORK..when i had done.So i decided i will paste the same for this month...coz whatever happened, happened on the very same day...well i could not write about the work but hey i could relate to allmost half the topic [:P]....
anyways everyone thanks for the comment and i hope this memories never come back...And if they do come again they will not live ...[;)]
Sorry everyone am not able to keep up with the recent blogging these engineering exams are keeping me busy....hope to catch up with ya all very soon...till then enjoy and try and find resolutions for the coming new year....
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